{"id":5229,"date":"2012-07-08T23:47:55","date_gmt":"2012-07-08T23:47:55","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/argyle.org\/?p=5229"},"modified":"2012-07-08T23:47:55","modified_gmt":"2012-07-08T23:47:55","slug":"novel-mid-point-tackling-the-sagging-middle","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/argyle.org\/?p=5229","title":{"rendered":"Novel mid-point. Tackling the sagging middle"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>My word count tells me I am right at the midpoint but my storyline says more like two thirds. So do I need more story? Should I just keep on going or go over the first part. Is this crises a good thing?<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/argyle.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/DSCF0387.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-5243\" title=\"DSCF0387\" src=\"https:\/\/argyle.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/DSCF0387-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I have written this novel in a particular way, after trying others that were less successful. And so far so good, the story seemed to keep chugging along so long as I show up regularly &#8211; almost everyday.<\/p>\n<p>Maybe it&#8217;s because I was warned and brought it on through my own trepidation, maybe because it is inevitable, but here I am at the dreaded sagging middle. A very important threat has just revealed itself to my character and I am not sure how much I should develop it.<\/p>\n<p>Up till now, I have just written, more or less sure of where it was going but I did agonize over one section when I had to get Elle (my protagonist) from one place to another and I was very resistant to do it. I wanted to avoid the whole move and come up with a compelling (read deus ex machina)\u00a0 reason for her <em>not<\/em> to endure this dangerous trip. The great lesson that I learned was that I identified why I didn&#8217;t want Elle to go on this journey.<\/p>\n<p>It was simple, I just didn&#8217;t want to write it. It was too complicated, tricky. In short, it was simply too much work and I didn&#8217;t know if I had it in me. Then I remembered something I heard from <a href=\"http:\/\/www.johngilstrap.com\/\">John Gilstrap,<\/a> New York Times bestselling suspense novelist and a panelist at this past Sleuthfest Conference:<\/p>\n<p><em><strong>A storytellers greatest sin is to squander drama<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>So I wrote the scene and it became an important turning point in the novel. Thank you Mr Gilstrap. That alone was well worth the price of admission.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/argyle.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/IMG_1421.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-5236\" title=\"IMG_1421\" src=\"https:\/\/argyle.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/07\/IMG_1421-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>He said a couple of other things as well, but he was wrong because he did teach me something.<\/p>\n<p>Was it tough to write, yes, until I forgot it was tough and just got on with it, imagining and reading about what the water was like a couple of days after a major hurricane. I can always fill in more details later, the point for me is to <em>get the first draft done.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>I know too much about how fear and laziness affect me to sell myself a lie about my motives. I am also tired of unfinished projects. I need to keep moving, like a tank, fearing that if I stop I may stay stalled forever.\u00a0 So far so good, fear seems to be working for me. And then I get the bliss of having made it work, loving the thing I just produced, glad I stuck to it.<\/p>\n<p>It may not be pretty or esoteric, but it works for me. I have plenty of time to rewrite, in fact I can&#8217;t wait to get there.<\/p>\n<p>I go to lots of conferences, listen to writers who manage to publish book after book. It is not that important to me that I love their particular style or genre,\u00a0 just that they get to the finish line, consistently producing quality work that does what it is supposed to do.<\/p>\n<p>Amongst the many other gems I heard from <a href=\"http:\/\/www.johngilstrap.com\/\">John Gilstrap,<\/a> about how to avoid the sagging middle is to <strong><em>stay out of your own way.<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em><strong>Write only if you cannot live without writing<\/strong><\/em><br \/>\n<em><strong> Write only what you alone can write<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>38,386 words so far. A tough week and one in which I am experimenting with possible avenues, complications.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>My word count tells me I am right at the midpoint but my storyline says more like two thirds. 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